Saturday, 12 January 2008

Adventure On Skull Island.

There was a captain called Captain BlueBeard.He had two children their names were
Molly and Jim.Their ship was called Saucy Sally.Their enemy was Captain Swagg.Captain Swagg wanted to steal the treasure map from Captain BlueBeard.At night Captain Swagg stole the map.But Jim made a copy of the map.Captain Bluebeard was saved by Jim.They followed the map to the treasure, when they were sailing they saw an island.The island was called Cut Throat Island.So they stopped sailing and went on the island.Captain Swagg was already there, he had the treasure but the treaure was fake he didnt know it was fake. He escaped with the treasure.Then Captain Bluebeard spotted a X on the trees and started digging there.When he finished he found the real treasure and became rich.

My favorite character is Captain Bluebeard because he is the captain and it would be fun to be a captain.I like the part in the story when Captain Bluebeard kicks Swagg off the ship.

get the book and readit !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

8 comments:

Mr Lea said...

Munnaan, this is great, you have become very good at retelling a stories plot, picking out the important features and teasing the reader with interesting parts. In your next review I want you to try something a little bit different. Firstly, try retelling the story in one or two short paragraphs. Then, for the rest of the review, focus on how well you think the author used language, word choices, plots twists, character descriptions and creative writing skills to keep you the reader interested. Perhaps the author didnt do these things, so you could tell us what was not so good about the book.
I want you to really focus on what you thought about the story, did it keep you interested, was the plot exciting, did the author make good language choices?
Keep up the great work!

Us Lot said...

Ameera and millie said...

muunnan this is a exllent story keep it up here is a joke
browneies and bs.





from ameera and millie!!!

Us Lot said...

Ameera and millie said...

muunnan this is a exllent story keep it up here is a joke
browneies and bs.





from ameera and millie!!!

Us Lot said...

to Munnaan
this is a lovely story
weLL DONE


I LOVE IT

Us Lot said...

Munnaan I like story its really good well done from Ameerah,Lois,Haidar

Us Lot said...

Munnaan I like your story it is really good well done from Ameerah

Us Lot said...

Munnaan I like your story it is really good well done from Ameerah

Us Lot said...

Munnaan this is a exalant story. You should see Mr Lea's comment. Do you remember bs bm and kissing.
Oh! and brownies, Heeeee!






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