Sunday, 6 January 2008

The princess and the pea

This is a story about a prince who wanted a real princess. He travelled all over the world and he gave up. One night a girl knocked at the door saying she was a princess. The queen tested to see if this was true.She made the princess's bed and put a pea under twenty quilts. In the
morning the queen asked the princess how she had slept. The princess replied that she had slept badly because there was something under the bed.The queen knew that she was a real princess. The prince and princess got married and they lived happily ever after.

Review By: Yasmin Bhatti

1 comment:

Mr Lea said...

Yasmin, this is a perfect review. You have used great sentence structures to slow the reader down and let them enjoy all the details of the plot. This is well planned and reads beautifully, well done.