Friday, 11 January 2008

The highway man

The soljers came riding riding riding,they tide bess right near the window untill she moed her finger and shot her self.
The highway man was looking at the window and screemd and the solljger shot him.

the ghost and hugt echder and bess and the highway man and
went on the hors and fihged nothe home.The wind was a torrent at the way back they
billed the houes the end
avni

1 comment:

mr lea said...

THis is a great piece of work Avni, well done.
I really liked te end verse:

The ghosts hugged each other,

And Bess and the Highwayman went on the horse to find another home,

The wind was a torrent on the way back.

Keep up this great effeort!