Sunday, 6 January 2008

we are going on a bear hunt

One day a whole family was going on a bear hunt they said "we are going on a bear hunt we're going to catch a big one what a beautiful day! we're not scared" and there were grass they coldent go over it they coldent go under it so they haft to go throo it. But, but they were achliy scared , after five hours they saw a narrow and large cave they tiptoe and they herd a roar they ran fast into the cave then they saw bear the bear had one shiny wet nose two big goggly eyes two big furry ears IT'S A BEAR!!!! quick back through the cave tiptoe tiptoe tiptoe back through the snowstorm! hoooo woooo! hoooo woooo! back through the forest stumble trip stumble trip stumble trip! back through the mud! squelch squerlch squelch squerlch, back through the river splash splosh splash splosh splash splosh, back through the grass! Swishy swashy! Swishy swashy! get to ur front door. Open the door up the stairs. Oh no we forgot to shut the door back down stairs shut the door back up stairs.into the bedroom. into bed. Under the covers. WE'RE NOT GOING ON A BEAR HUNT AGAIN!!!!!!! the end.

illustrater:helen oxenbury

Author:Micheal Rosen

3 comments:

Mr Lea said...

This is a wonderful review Lois, well done.
I really like the way you have blended details from the story with your own ideas, like when you describe that, "After five hours they saw a narrow and large cave."
It is also great to see that you worked with your brother, sharing ideas is great fun.
Thank you.

Anonymous said...

thank you mr lea i think lois tried very hard

by benjamin

Us Lot said...

TO AURTHER MICEALE ROSEN

YOU ARE THE BEST AURTHEAR IN THE
WORLD YOU MADE A LONG STORY AND
EVRYONE LOVES YOUR STORYS





FROM AMEERA AND SANA