Friday, 4 January 2008

on the way home

There was a girl calld claire.She had a bad knee.On the way home she met kind of creeping animals that make her bad knee and she told all her friends about the creaping animals and her bad knee.

1 comment:

Class P said...

Rylan,
This is a great post with good use of language to interest the reader.
One question, do you think the animal stories were real or was she trying to impress her friends by making up amazing stories?
Well done, Mr Lea.