Monday, 14 January 2008

eric the red

once upon a time Eric is a very clevr ber some bers are black and wit but Eric is a red ber

4 comments:

Lois said...

Get better at writing.
from MAHIRA AND RYLAN

Lois said...

Get better at writing.
from MAHIRA AND RYLAN

Us Lot said...

Azeez.
We think it was a great start to your book review. Please do not get upset by peoples comments, just carry on and we are sure your review will graet. we are looking forward to reading it.
munnaan and munnaan mum.

Maria Kalatta said...

Azeez.
Keep working hard and persevere with your efforts and I am in no doubt that you will continue to improve even more over time..
WELL DONE!
Mrs Kalatta