Tuesday, 8 January 2008

jack and beenstork

one sad day jack and his mother was very por so jacks mum sead go to the marcit to sel the cou on the way jack sor a old man the old man sead cood we swop stuf jack sead yes so jack shod the beens to her mum was not pleesd she throd the beens out the windows the next day a beenstork jack clim up the beenstork and sor a giynt jack stol the hen and the goldn egg and the giynt wok up and chast jack calld mum mum got a axto cut the beenstork doun

1 comment:

Mr Lea said...

This is a great review Azeez, well done. I look forward to reading your next one.