Friday, 4 January 2008

Vesuvius poovius Kes Gray Chris Mould

This is a story of a man and a wumen they had to have a green toylet.
They had the poovius poo in the Poovius poo in the world.
They had a party there was 2 fat pepol.They said we got 2 go to the loo.The
party was over.They had to leve now.And the man went 2 the loo.

Avni

THE END

1 comment:

Class P said...

Avni,
Thanks for your great post. This book sounds really funny and a bit disgusting, I would love to read it.
With your next review think about planning it out before writing straight onto the post, it will help you organise your ideas.
Well done.
Mr Lea.