Monday, 7 January 2008

The Highway Man

The trees are swooping around in the dark dark town.

The moonlight is shining down.
The HighMan is out.
The High man is the creepyist man about.
The moor is creepy, and dark.

He had a black triangle french hat like a dark park.
His coat was dark red.
The High way man shoots the people dead.

by Munnaan and Sana


mr lea said...

This is a great start, I can see and hear a pattern developing with the words you are using. As you continue take time to check that you are really describing your ideas carefully, so that the reader will notget confused.
You might want to look at the first line in the second verse.
Well done.

Class P said...

sana and Munnaan keep it up
I love it