tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3307220017200880465.post9152439833706947486..comments2023-05-06T14:21:12.435+01:00Comments on Class P. Reading for Pleasure. Our Journal: Adventure On Skull Island.Us Lothttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09174504833738140611noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3307220017200880465.post-25324159538850582392008-01-17T16:10:00.000+00:002008-01-17T16:10:00.000+00:00Munnaan this is a exalant story. You should see Mr...Munnaan this is a exalant story. You should see Mr Lea's comment. Do you remember bs bm and kissing.<BR/>Oh! and brownies, Heeeee!<BR/><BR/><BR/><BR/><BR/><BR/><BR/>LOVE sana xxxxxxxxxxxx!Us Lothttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09174504833738140611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3307220017200880465.post-24376570754842334652008-01-15T14:29:00.001+00:002008-01-15T14:29:00.001+00:00Munnaan I like your story it is really good well d...Munnaan I like your story it is really good well done from AmeerahUs Lothttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09174504833738140611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3307220017200880465.post-88712708052033740572008-01-15T14:29:00.000+00:002008-01-15T14:29:00.000+00:00Munnaan I like your story it is really good well d...Munnaan I like your story it is really good well done from AmeerahUs Lothttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09174504833738140611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3307220017200880465.post-63789030586592180962008-01-15T14:27:00.000+00:002008-01-15T14:27:00.000+00:00Munnaan I like story its really good well done fro...Munnaan I like story its really good well done from Ameerah,Lois,HaidarUs Lothttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09174504833738140611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3307220017200880465.post-27676533461211753402008-01-14T13:52:00.000+00:002008-01-14T13:52:00.000+00:00to Munnaanthis is a lovely story weLL DONEI LOVE I...to Munnaan<BR/>this is a lovely story <BR/>weLL DONE<BR/><BR/><BR/>I LOVE ITUs Lothttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09174504833738140611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3307220017200880465.post-8085957842000789282008-01-14T13:51:00.001+00:002008-01-14T13:51:00.001+00:00Ameera and millie said...muunnan this is a exllent...Ameera and millie said...<BR/><BR/>muunnan this is a exllent story keep it up here is a joke <BR/>browneies and bs.<BR/><BR/><BR/><BR/><BR/><BR/>from ameera and millie!!!Us Lothttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09174504833738140611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3307220017200880465.post-83000056257950308082008-01-14T13:51:00.000+00:002008-01-14T13:51:00.000+00:00Ameera and millie said...muunnan this is a exllent...Ameera and millie said...<BR/><BR/>muunnan this is a exllent story keep it up here is a joke <BR/>browneies and bs.<BR/><BR/><BR/><BR/><BR/><BR/>from ameera and millie!!!Us Lothttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09174504833738140611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3307220017200880465.post-47437604691894493062008-01-14T09:59:00.000+00:002008-01-14T09:59:00.000+00:00Munnaan, this is great, you have become very good ...Munnaan, this is great, you have become very good at retelling a stories plot, picking out the important features and teasing the reader with interesting parts. In your next review I want you to try something a little bit different. Firstly, try retelling the story in one or two short paragraphs. Then, for the rest of the review, focus on how well you think the author used language, word choices, plots twists, character descriptions and creative writing skills to keep you the reader interested. Perhaps the author didnt do these things, so you could tell us what was not so good about the book.<BR/>I want you to really focus on what you thought about the story, did it keep you interested, was the plot exciting, did the author make good language choices?<BR/>Keep up the great work!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com