Thursday, 24 January 2008
The Secret Friend
friend. Pander asked what is the name of the person? Gander said I can not tell you.
Gander got working. If you want to find out the rest get the book.
Saturday, 19 January 2008
Marys secret - David McKee
Mary's mum goes to work and is stuck in alot of traffic that the cars were bumper to bumper. She saves money on petrol because the other cars pushed her along. She buys Mary her new bouncy shoes.
Mary's mum tells Mary to keep a secret on what happened to her mum. But Mary tells Anne her best friend who tells her sister. Her sister tells others in the playground. The secret is spread to everyone. The next morning everyone comes to see the traffic which causes more problems.
The best part of the book was when people were telling the secret to others and not keeping the secret.
I did not really enjoy this book because the story was not very interesting, the author was not very imaginative and it was a very short story.
By Haidar
Wednesday, 16 January 2008
The Giraffe and Pelly and Me
The giraffe had a magical power with her neck that grew lomnger and longer.The pelicans job was the bucket and the monkey was the cleaner.They started work.The giraffe saw a burgular in the palace stealing the jewels.The pelican caught the burgular inside his beak.The duke said to the giraffe , pelican and monkey "as a reward gifarre can eat the pink purple tree, mokey can have the walnut tree and pelican can have salmon from the river, as for you Billy you can have what ever wish you want." Billy decided to build back the old sweet shop.
I like Roald Dahl imagination in the story. Roald Dahl had good thinking about the animals that he chose in the story.He was thinking about what animal could be a ladder so he chose a giraffe.He wanted a animal that could be a good bucket so he chose a pelican because it has a big beak.
It would be fun to be Billy because i could have a ride in a pelicans beak and go on a giraafes back.
My favorite character is monkey becease he sings funny songs.
Monday, 14 January 2008
the very hungry caterpillar
Arrish
eric the red
Sunday, 13 January 2008
The Trouble with Anteaters - David Sutherland
Firstly he eats Julie's pet ant farm and breaks the glass at the school pet day.
Secondly he licks and Zapps the fly off the Vicars nose who had come for tea. The tea falls all over the Vicars legs.
Both times Max and Lenny get into trouble.
Max's dad wants Lenny to go back to the Zoo.
At the end Lenny gets to stay because he stops the burglar from getting away.
My favourite part of the story was when Lenny beats up the burglar and sits on him.
My favourite character is Lenny the anteater because he kisses everyone.
This was a funny book to read.
By Haidar Khaliq
The Highway man
untill she moved her finger and and shot her self.
The highway man was looking at the window and screemed why and the soliders shot him.
The ghosts and huger echuder and bess and the highway man went on the hors and fined anathe home.
The wind was a torent at theway back they billed the house it had a bedroom,and and a batroom,even a nice kichen,and bess got the same cloat as the highway
man.
THE END
I like his progic of Thehighway man because it,s a good progicit
tit,s a good story.
Saturday, 12 January 2008
Adventure On Skull Island.
Molly and Jim.Their ship was called Saucy Sally.Their enemy was Captain Swagg.Captain Swagg wanted to steal the treasure map from Captain BlueBeard.At night Captain Swagg stole the map.But Jim made a copy of the map.Captain Bluebeard was saved by Jim.They followed the map to the treasure, when they were sailing they saw an island.The island was called Cut Throat Island.So they stopped sailing and went on the island.Captain Swagg was already there, he had the treasure but the treaure was fake he didnt know it was fake. He escaped with the treasure.Then Captain Bluebeard spotted a X on the trees and started digging there.When he finished he found the real treasure and became rich.
My favorite character is Captain Bluebeard because he is the captain and it would be fun to be a captain.I like the part in the story when Captain Bluebeard kicks Swagg off the ship.
get the book and readit !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OGGY THE CAVEMAN
The High Way Man
He did not come at noon; And out the golden sunset, before the rise 'o' the moon,When the road was moving ribbon,looping the purple field A red coat group came- stomping -stomping -spomping- King Georeg's men came walking up to the old hotel.
The Highway Man
The moon was shining and making scary pictures in the clouds.
One scary person was very very evil, he lived in a haunted house.
Which had lots of mouse.
He was riding his horse all night long, until midnight.
He is the Highway man who wore tight clothes with a French hat and had a sword with Jills and liked to fight.
The Highway man fell in love with Bess and she loved him too.He wanted to save her from her dad who beat her for no reason.
He knocked on her window and the door was locked, he whispered "I will save you, one kiss my boney sweetheart, I will be back in the the morning."
But he did not arrive until night time and saw Bess was dead.
He screamed with his sword and laid in the bed.
The highway gets killed by the army and becomes a ghost and meets his love Bess who is alos a ghost.
By Haidar
Friday, 11 January 2008
The Highway Man
In the spooky old horse park, it was empty but then an old crooked man called Tim lazed deep in the messy hay.He had pig's swill with mustard and ketchup as his hair!! His clothes were all ragged and his trousers had patches and he wore crumbly sandals upon his feet.
When the Highway man met his love, he crouched down and said..."Marry me my love, oh please sweetheart, I love you". Then off he went to get some money.
Tim was spying on them, he looked as dumb as a dog. He marched to some soldiers, who came up to the old inn door. They grabbed Bess and tied her up to a bed, then they hid. Then the Highway man skidded up to Bess and said " Bess". Suddenly to warn the Highway man, Bess shot herself ....BANG!! It was too late.
The Highway man charged at the soldiers but sadly they shot at him and they both died.
Their beautiful spirits floated away out of their bodies.
THE END.
By Millie Patel, Class P.
the highwayman
The highway man
The highway man
The Highawayman
The moon was curured with cloudy scary clouds,
the road was crueep scary hontid road,
the ghostly highwayman
came spookly in night He had a french crocked hat
with a sparkle gun and sowrd.
He gidied up to the old inn DOOR!!!!!!!!!!
The blackeyed daughter was platting a red not in her hair.
But who was waiting there!!!!!!!!
It was THE HIGHWAYMAN!!!!!!!!
After the highway man said don't worey I
will be back at moonlight nothing can make me stop.
I will be back tomorrow he said.
tim told the king that he will be back by midenight
so came to the in yard door
bess got tied up and strong saltape on her mouth they hide beside her bed
they WaITED FOR HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
BESS GOT HER FINGER OUT AND SHOT HER SELF!!!!!!!!
The highwayman came and saw bess get dead.
he got his horse up and shouted really loudly like this RAAAAAAAAAAAAA.
and he got shot.
then when there was no one there bess and the highwayman ghostly woke up and
and huged.
and lived happily ever after
by ameera and lois
The highway man
The highway man was looking at the window and screemd and the solljger shot him.
the ghost and hugt echder and bess and the highway man and
went on the hors and fihged nothe home.The wind was a torrent at the way back they
billed the houes the end
avni
The highway man
The highway man
im going to win a prize tonight so he went. tim herd him and told solders. Then
thay grabed Bess and tied her to the bed so the highwayman cuold see her.
millie and nathan
Highway man
The moonlight is shining down.
The HighMan is out.
The High man is the creepyist man about.
The moor is creepy, and dark.
He had a black triangle french hat like a dark park.
His coat was dark red.
The High way man shoots the people dead.
The Highway man said to Bess"one kiss my beatifal sweatheart,i will see you tonight
i got a prize tonight."
"no matter what i will be there."
Then Tims face was shocked.
He didn't come in sunset morning.
He did't come in noon.
When the rise of the moon came two solidurs stomping.
The solidurs tied Bess up.
Then the Highway man came and saw Bess tied and shot herself.
So the Highway roared.
Then the Highway man got shot.
Then the spirits came out and they kissed.
Highway man
The moonlight is shining down.
The HighMan is out.
The High man is the creepyist man about.
The moor is creepy, and dark.
He had a black triangle french hat like a dark park.
His coat was dark red.
The High way man shoots the people dead.
the highwayman
came spookly in night He had a french crocked hat
with a sparkle gun and sowrd.
He gidied up to the old inn DOOR!!!!!!!!!!
The blackeyed daughter was platting a red not in her hair.
But who was waiting there!!!!!!!!
It was THE HIGHWAYMAN!!!!!!!!
After the highway man said don't worey I
will be back at moonlight nothing can make me stop.
I will be back tomorrow he said.
tim told the king that he will be back by midenight
so came to the in yard door
bess got tied up and strong saltape on her mouth they hide beside her bed
they WaITED FOR HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
BESS GOT HER FINGER OUT AND SHOT HER SELF!!!!!!!!
The highwayman came and saw bess get dead.
he got his horse up and shouted really loudly like this RAAAAAAAAAAAAA.
and he got shot.
Thursday, 10 January 2008
The highway man
By Ameerah
He'll wear a black french hat on his forehead.
A bit of lace on his chin.
He'll even wear boots up to his thigh!
And he'll wear a clock in dark red and with golden sparks
Wednesday, 9 January 2008
the high way man
The Highway man
Tuesday, 8 January 2008
jack and beenstork
jack and beenstork
The high way man
The highway man
called bess.She was a nice girl she keeps on geting beetup
by her dad and keeps on geting black eyes.
The highway man was knocking on the door. Bess looked out of the window.
she done hair and opend the door and said come in why do you get black eyes my dad
keeps on keeps on beeting me up.The next day the highway man was cross tim was in love with bess.But the highway man got so cross so he got his and tim took bess
and went with Tim.And the highway man was on bessis dads side. And when she got home bof of them gave her a good slap and went to bed.And the next day and got mared
Avni and Rylan
The highway man
mahira. yasmin.
he c
Monday, 7 January 2008
This is a bat a monkey . he was scared he went at into a park .It was dark he thougth that he saw a goast. but i t was a van then he had fun on the swing he was scared it was a goast again but it was a train then he played on the slide then he thought he saw a monster but it was a bike. then he went home he did his work had his food done his brush than he went to sleep . The End.
Sai Preeti
the highwayman
The wind was thick making a stormy torrando,
The moon was shining, glittering on the cobbled path.
The Highwayman lept onto his evil, crafty, horse,
When riding in a carriage you will here him cry,
STAND AND DELIVER, YOUR MONEY OR YOUR LIFE!
His hat was black old and bucklled you will hear him tiptoe,
ameera and millie
The Highway man
The Highway men was riding one at a time on there dark scary hores.
They rided through the dark scary forest,he saw a rich man riding in a carage.
He had a black triangle french hat,
He had black boots up to his thise.
His coat was dark golden red with glittering.
By Ameerah,Lois
The Highway Man
The moonlight is shining down.
The HighMan is out.
The High man is the creepyist man about.
The moor is creepy, and dark.
He had a black triangle french hat like a dark park.
His coat was dark red.
The High way man shoots the people dead.
by Munnaan and Sana
Sunday, 6 January 2008
maisy likes driving
maisy likes her tractor, it goes chug, chug . Maisy likes to driving her car. Maisylikes to driving her fire engine and Maisy likes flying her plane. Maisy likes driving around.
by Nathan Padman
jack and the beanstalk
by DENZEL TAKAVADII
The princess and the pea
morning the queen asked the princess how she had slept. The princess replied that she had slept badly because there was something under the bed.The queen knew that she was a real princess. The prince and princess got married and they lived happily ever after.
Review By: Yasmin Bhatti
we are going on a bear hunt
One day a whole family was going on a bear hunt they said "we are going on a bear hunt we're going to catch a big one what a beautiful day! we're not scared" and there were grass they coldent go over it they coldent go under it so they haft to go throo it. But, but they were achliy scared , after five hours they saw a narrow and large cave they tiptoe and they herd a roar they ran fast into the cave then they saw bear the bear had one shiny wet nose two big goggly eyes two big furry ears IT'S A BEAR!!!! quick back through the cave tiptoe tiptoe tiptoe back through the snowstorm! hoooo woooo! hoooo woooo! back through the forest stumble trip stumble trip stumble trip! back through the mud! squelch squerlch squelch squerlch, back through the river splash splosh splash splosh splash splosh, back through the grass! Swishy swashy! Swishy swashy! get to ur front door. Open the door up the stairs. Oh no we forgot to shut the door back down stairs shut the door back up stairs.into the bedroom. into bed. Under the covers. WE'RE NOT GOING ON A BEAR HUNT AGAIN!!!!!!! the end.
illustrater:helen oxenbury
Author:Micheal Rosen
Dick Whittington
The boy's name is Dick Whittington.
He went to London, looking for a job and he met a rich merchant there. This rich man made his money by selling things to people in other countries. Poor Dick started working for him. He had a cat. One day Dick's boss said to him, his ship was ready to sail to a faraway country and Dick has anything to send on the ship. Dick gave his cat. The captain of the ship went to a contry, had a rats problem. He sold Dick's cat to the king there. King gave him lots of money and gold. Captain came to London and gave money and gold to Dick. He became a very rich man. Also he became Lord Mayor of London three times.
My favourite character is Dick Whittington.
I like this book because it is very interesting to read.
By Calan.
The Night Pirates
Saturday, 5 January 2008
Jack and the Beanstalk
Jacks mum threw the beans out of the window and it grew into a humongous beanstalk during the night.
Jack had a adventure when he climbed up the beanstalk and into a giant’s castle. He took money and a hen that lays golden eggs .Jack and his mother were never poor again.
from Oluwaseyi Okeniyi
Iggy Pig 's Snowy Day
read the book to find out the ending
Arrish
Dinosaurs
Goldilocks and the three bears
The Ugly Duckling
Once upon a time there was seven duck eggs.Then the eggs hatched , six ducklings looked beautiful and one was ugly."You are so ugly " said the mother duck,"GO AWAY.'' The ugly duckling saw a cow. "You are so ugly" said the cow,''GO AWAY.'' The ugly duckling saw a cat.''You are ugly'' said the cat GO AWAY.'' The ugly duckling saw a rabbit .''You are ugly'' said the rabbit,''GO AWAY.''The ugly duckling saw a boy.''You are ugly'' said the boy,''GO AWAY.''The ugly duckling saw a girl.''You are ugly''said the girl,''GO AWAY.''The ugly duckling was alone.He was very upset. One day, the ugly duckling saw some pretty swan's.''Look in the water,'' said the swan's.''You are beautiful''said the swan's.''Come with us beautiful swan.'' And he did. The end
Noisy Train
by calan.
Mr. Happy finds a hobby
In the story Mr Happy and Mr Grumble meet lots of people with different hobbies. But Mr Grumble does not like any of them.
My favourite character was Mr Rush because he likes driving fast cars.
At the end of the book, Mr Happy finds a hobby for Mr Grumble. It was fishing because he grumbles when he is fishing.
This was a fun book to read.
By Haidar Khaliq
The Witches by ROALD DAHL.
This is the longest story that I have read.I enjoyed it because it was imagntive.I like the Grand High witch because she made the formula.I like the part when
the witches change into mice.
Get the book and start reading!!!!!!!!
Friday, 4 January 2008
Hansel and Gretel by Gaby Goldsack
I liked the book because it had a happy ending and the two baddies went away.
by Avni THE END
Eco-Wolf and the Three Pigs
Millie
Hairy Maclary from Donaldson's Dairy
Mr Strong and the flood.
BY MAHIRA
on the way home
Vesuvius poovius Kes Gray Chris Mould
They had the poovius poo in the Poovius poo in the world.
They had a party there was 2 fat pepol.They said we got 2 go to the loo.The
party was over.They had to leve now.And the man went 2 the loo.
Avni
THE END
The second princess
Farmer duck
the man was a lazy guye and sat in bed all day and eating choclats.The poor duck
did all of the work.He was all floppy and sorrowful because he had to fech the
cows from the field and the other animals
if you are desprert to find out more
Hairy Maclary from Donaldson's Dairy
By Lois,Ameerah
Esio trot
The story of the Little Mole
In this story the mole got a stincy poo on his head so he huntied for the animal. He saw a brid a
horse and he didat find who had done it.
If you want to find who did it, get the book and read it yourself!
Calan.