Wednesday 19 March 2008

th eerie terrifying highwayman with a feamle nag!

The adored highwayman was trip traping over the motorway, the road was called Chigwell
murtwell drive,She rode on horseback, she had stolen the horse from Collier Row stabels. Why, because she could not drive and needed to move fast.The adored Highwayman is me, Ameera, a young girl, in trouble.Me and my mare(horse)traveld we saw a very beatuiful house. This was where I needed to get to, it would be a safe place to hide.
I just put my horse on some kind of wood and tied the stallion with the string.
I knocked on the door and it was my(big)brother who was my age and i liked him and he liked me. He would help me. I made noodels for him and he made me bread. While we sat and ate, someone was waching me and it was the police who was tracing after



!!!!!!!!!!!Because i stoll my collier row stables nag because i couldent ride a ar.While we sat there silently there was a shadow of the moon behind the back house the shadow looked like a dead sighn i new it was a dead sighn because it said
kill her Ameera.So i said to him i am gonna leave he did not stop me because he always let me do anything, i said it because of that sighn so i left the police they saw me and chaced after me because i was evil and i I got on my horse i did not give my horse back because i couldent drive.
and i speeded my horse up and trip trapped realley fast but suddenly sadly they caught me and warend me not to shoot them but i did i only shot 1 then they shot
me and i fell off my blachish brown horse by fainting. They took the horse back to the
collier row stables and they left me on the grond in the night time because
they did not want me to do anything else wrong to other people
that was the end of my story and the hiwaylady!!!!!!!!!by ameera nazir.

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

This is excellent and the Parkhill children really enjoyed listening to your tale, I wonder if they will visit our Blog, How could we get them to do that, any ideas?

Us Lot said...

i love the story ameera i thought it was very interesting and exciting and it a bit of humour in it. keep up the good work ameera.

from your big sister-amani

Us Lot said...

thank you







amani from ameera

Us Lot said...

yes love it

Us Lot said...

Very exiting. ameera i like your story.








sana. xxxx