tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3307220017200880465.post8211744872388043802..comments2023-05-06T14:21:12.435+01:00Comments on Class P. Reading for Pleasure. Our Journal: The second princessUs Lothttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09174504833738140611noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3307220017200880465.post-37562360508837252612008-01-04T20:58:00.000+00:002008-01-04T20:58:00.000+00:00Oh man, that second Princess sounds so evil, tryin...Oh man, that second Princess sounds so evil, trying to get a wolf to eat her sister!!!<BR/>This is a great post, filled with details. I really like the way you have used dialogue to interest the reader.<BR/>In your next post think about using commas and full stops to slow the reader down so they can think more about what you are saying.<BR/>Well done Mr Lea.Us Lothttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09174504833738140611noreply@blogger.com